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Today and yesterday (or 25/3/21 and 24/3/21) we looked at poems also we recorded our poems here is want I did also here is the poem without me record .
We looked at poems for something called Poetry slam. 🖆🖆🖆🖆
The thing that was hard for me was when I didn't have even I Ideas. 😬😬😬
Hope you liked it BYEEEE🎔🎔💗💗
Ka pai Salote. I love the way your writing fades out to reveal the subject of your kenning poem. I'm also impressed with how clearly you read out your poem. Did you try any other types of poem? Or comment on other bloggers who have taken part? You can see them on this sheet
ReplyDeleteMālō e lelei Salote! Well done on reading aloud your poem and using screencastify to record your performance! I like that you were honest and mentioned that the hardest part was when you didn't have any ideas. Is there something that I could do in the future to help you with coming up with ideas when we are doing writing?
ReplyDeleteWell done Salote. I really like the way that you have incorporated all the aspects of Learn, Create, Share into this aspect of your work. Congratulations on being named Blogger of the week.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Salote for sharing your poem and recording it for us. This poetry format is a very quick way for you to tell us about yourself. I really liked how you inset your recording so we could read along with you reading it aloud and how you included the visuals at the end. Have you shared it with your family?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Taj from paroa school.great job on it it is rely well dun but you could of put some more culer because if you did it would of catched more eye's.
ReplyDeleteHi solta I like how you made your good work its but I think you shod chick it will I am not chring to be mean by jana.
ReplyDeleteKia ora salote,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used those words and to be honest the people who sit on the sofa always hog it. But you made a mistake you said mice hater but the poem said mice killer but anyways it was great.
Kai Pai Salote!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Angel and I go to Glen Innes School!
I really enjoyed watching your little video and even your slideshow!
I really like your last slide!
Keep the great work up!
Angel :)
Kia ora salote,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used those words and to be honest the people who sit on the sofa always hog it. But you made a mistake you said mice hater but the poem said mice killer but anyways it was great!
Asmah
KIA ORA Salote
ReplyDeleteWell done on your blog. I think its meant to be fish lover cause they love eating fish.
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