Ka pai Salote. Good on you for thinking about your writing. I agree that you could work on your punctuation. I think the more books and stories you read, the easier you'll find it to come up with ideas.
Kia Ora Salote My name is Nasteho and I am from Hay Park school too! I really liked your writing you did on your writing sample like punctuation and spelling grammar. I think next time you could say that was all or bye And maybe you could add more detail on your ideas you could look at the pictures then add adjectives and verbs. Look back and try to fix putting a space before you write something after a full stop.
Ka pai Salote. Good on you for thinking about your writing. I agree that you could work on your punctuation. I think the more books and stories you read, the easier you'll find it to come up with ideas.
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